I don't know why some people leave rude comments, I liked it.
Your singer needs to listen to some of the older Artist who performed songs like this. Even though the songs lends itself to an improvisational style, it must be kept in time, late vocal entries seem amateurish. Your singer needs to be looking into the camera in such an intimate context, as you are portraying here. Her dress is not flattering and her hand motions unnatural and conflict with mood of the song. Good voice, seems not to be familiar with the development of melodic material. Dialect is southern-slang, it would be better if it were less nasal in quality "jumpin'". Would be better to use "Fourthy-vocings" with (jazz voicings) and in a more "stride-style" accompaniment. Listen to a recording of this with a drummer using brushes and bass for reference, (just a suggestion).
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